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Post by Sakure Akagi on Aug 20, 2008 19:24:22 GMT -6
Name/ Age Rob, 20
RULES, GUIDELINES, STAFF AUTHORITY? Yes
CHARACTER REQUIREMENTS
Name Sakure Akagi
Age 20
Gender male
Deities Ehlona
Alignment Chaotic Neutral
Race 2/3 human (mom & dad), 1/3 Demonic (unknown relation from father's half)
Family Mother died during a raider attack on their village when he was 18, she was the only one he was close to, since his father was always off fighting in some war, or out in the woods hunting for something he never spoke of. his father's whereabouts are unknown Physical Description about 5 foot 11, has an average muscular build to him not too buff, but not to scrawny either, with soft, long black hair that reaches down to his waist, and strange red eyes (part of his demonic heritage)
Distinguishing Marks not too many scars except for a long gash across his back he received from a raider's blade the night his mother died
Example RP Post Sakure had never quite gotten used to the stares he received from people when they got a glimpse of his eyes, 20 years he's dealt with it, and yet it seems like every day is harder than the last, walking down the street of the village he could see the different villagers try to hide their staring, but he knew better, and he knew it was a matter of time before someone tried to start a fight with him because of it. "might as well get the stuff i came here for.." he muttered to himself as he headed into the general supply store.
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Post by Wolfyre on Aug 23, 2008 7:28:43 GMT -6
Alright, short sweet, to the point. Could of used a bit more on the example rp, but I know how you rp. i will let it slide.
Also, you might wanna keep an eye one the spelling of your deities names...I don't think Ehlonna would be happy to have a devout follower mispell her name. She would probably take it asmockery or disrespect or disloyalty. Just be careful on that alright. On the other hand, the app is fine. just do watch spelling & grammar especially on your goddess. Do it again & the Dungeon Master may have her punish you. ***Grins deviously.***[/b]
FREESTYLE CHARACTER APPLICATION APPROVED!!!
GO FORTH & BEGIN RPING!!!
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